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« Thread Started on Jan 21, 2007, 4:33pm »

Character Name: First and Last

Age: 1...2...3...4...5...6...7...8... you get the idea.

Rank: Same as usual.

Water Mammal Spirit and Clan Job: Refer to this thread for info.

Appearance: Provide a picture with the height and weight underneath, or provide a 60 word description.

No matter what, your character will be wearing pure blue and wearing the clan necklace.

Why Do You Want To Join?: MUST BE TWO PARAGRAPHS!

Did You Read The Rules? Didja?


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[b]Character Name:[/b]

[b]Age:[/b]

[b]Rank:[/b]

[b]Water Mammal Spirit and Clan Job:[/b]

[b]Appearance:[/b]

[b]Why Do You Want To Join?:[/b]

[b]Did You Read The Rules?[/b]


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« Reply #1 on Jan 22, 2007, 12:48pm »

Character Name: Ayu Kujira

Age: 16

Rank: Missing-Nin

Water Mammal Spirit and Clan Job: Blue Whale / not in clan

Appearance: Normally appearing to be a fairly fit young man, about 5'5" and weighing roughly 135 pounds, with light blue hair and deep blue eyes, Ayu is a strange and mysterious child. He rarely shows emotion in his normal form, and when in his 'true' form, the only emotions he shows seem to identify the fact that he wants only to destroy. When transformed, Ayu turns completely blue, his skin thickening, his muscles bulging slightly, and a blow hole ripping open on the back of his head. A tiny dorsal fin sprouts from his back, and a tail grows down from the base of his spine with a horizontal fin at the tip.

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Why Do You Want To Join?: It was a very interesting clan idea and seemed like it would be fun. I looked forward to something new and figured I would give it a try. As well as hoping I could use the chance to possibly create new plot. I wanted to be able to play another character, and this one seemed like it would be fun. Also, since it is the legendary spirit of the clan and such, I figured I would be able to add plot and story to the board, and to Kiri especially. I wanted to be able to play a character that really appealed to me, with a fun and interesting clan, and be able to bring up story while doing it.

Did You Read The Rules? Hinata and Narutooooo!

((Might wanna change what is required for appearance since you MUST have a picture *nods*))
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« Reply #2 on Jan 23, 2007, 8:05pm »

*edit*

Ok, here we go!

1. It would be nice if you could make that into two paragraphs, that means two bodies of text, and three sentences in each.

2. Good job on appearance

3. If you lengthen the reason, and get bijuu accepted, you will be in.

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« Reply #3 on Jan 23, 2007, 8:42pm »

Character Name: Ryuu Kujira

Age: 17

Rank: Hunter Nin

Water Mammal Spirit and Clan Job: Narwhal, Ninja

Appearance: [image]
Height: 5’ 9”
Weight: 147 pounds

Why Do You Want To Join? To me it sounds like you put a lot of hard work and thought into this clan and kekkei Genkai, to be a part of something like this would be cool. It looks like this clan has a lot of flexibility and has many openings to improve the individual clan members, which is a very interesting concept. I mean the base of the clan is fisherman and only a few are actually ninja. So if you can become a ninja from this clan you have basically a near limitless possibility to improve on yourself along with your water mammal spirit.

Speaking of the water mammal spirits, I think that they are totally awesome. I mean that not ever single person in the clan is normal. Most of the people are unique because they are born with a special spirit and their Kekkei Genkai is also unique to them as well. They have their own special features pertaining to their specific spirit and they can also create their own special techniques that correspond with the special features to become an awesome shinobi. Because of all of these unique features and their near limitless potential I think that anyone from this clan could become a genuine awesome shinobi.

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« Reply #4 on Jan 23, 2007, 8:48pm »

This is very close to being approved! All I would like you to do, is to go back into why you want to be a part of the clan, and add commas and periods where they need to be. This won't take too much time either. Post here again when edited and I will surely approve! Thanks for you're interest!! Also, Neji, that is what i want for why you want to be a part of the clan.
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« Reply #5 on Jan 23, 2007, 8:57pm »

I think that I got everything now, but I am not sure. So if you see anything let me know.
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« Reply #6 on Jan 23, 2007, 9:02pm »

Ok, that is fine! approved!
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« Reply #7 on Jan 23, 2007, 9:08pm »

Ok, I will go make the profile now then.

Edit: Do you mind if I mention Midori in my History

FinalEdit: the profile is up now.
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« Reply #8 on Jan 23, 2007, 9:15pm »

thats fine, you can also mention npc father. (leader of clan)
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« Reply #9 on Jan 23, 2007, 9:56pm »

Here I go!

Neji: Your code is still broken, and you need to provide some sort of a picture, as a lot of people are horrible with picturing what the words describe in their minds.

Chouji: From what I can see, yours is fine.

EVERYONE READING THIS: DO NOT POST IN THIS THREAD AGAIN!
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« Reply #10 on Jan 25, 2007, 5:31pm »

Just so you know, you can still make a character, just make a separate thread for them in the clan sub-board. Keep using the template though, and the admins (and me) will get to you. Thanks!!

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« Reply #11 on Jan 25, 2007, 8:30pm »

Ok, I had to change the appearance of my character. I like this one better^_^
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« Reply #12 on Jan 25, 2007, 8:43pm »

OK NO MORE POSTING! Iy would be great if you copy and pasted the code into a new thread, and once you did that then delete all of these posts so we can clean this thread up so it looks like what it is supposed to look like.
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« Reply #13 on Jan 27, 2007, 9:05pm »

This thread is LOCKED. This post if for those of you that have the nasty little habit of editing your posts for no damn reason.
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